For my first post, I'd like to introduce myself. My favorite food is lasagna and carbonara. Actually I like
every cheesey food.
I've also been to India. India has many interesting thing to see like the Tajmahal.
Also I have a dog. My dog's name is quiche. He is very cute and playful, but sometimes very naughty. Thank you for reading my blog. I think you got some information about me.
The reason why you like cheesy food is because your cheesy.
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답글삭제Your dog's picture?
답글삭제I didn't know you had a dog.
답글삭제I want to have a dog.:(
Hi Do Hyun,
답글삭제i enjoyed learning more aabout you from your post. The pictures are a nice touch. Next time try to write a little more.
Hi!
답글삭제It is good to know better about you from this self-introduction. India is really a good place to visit. Also, good use of pictures! I look forward to reading your future posts.
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)
my favorite food are.
답글삭제cheesy.
India has many interesting things to see.
Compare these corrections with your original ones.
It is your first English blog so I should not discourage you by pointing out all grammatical mistakes. I only did to help you Son.
So don't take it too personally. I love you more than anyone in the world except God. kkk