Hello fellow readers!
Today
I'm going to write about the movie brave. After watching the movie brave, I
want to compare and contrast my family and Merida's family. I think my family
is better than Merida's family and I'll explain why. It's because my mom is
more relaxed of rules than Merida's mom, I can do whatever I want to do
more oftentimes than Merida, and my father does what he want's to do
without listening to my mom.
First,
I want to compare my mom to Merida's mom, Elinor. A good part of my mom is that
she is more relaxed about rules than Merida's mom. For an Example, I don't hear
something like 'a prince does~' In my case, 'a kid does~' from my mom. Another
goods part of my mom is she is able to understand me. On the other hand,
Merida's mom doesn't know how to understand her daughters mind. In the movie,
she thought that it was good for Merida to marry quickly while Merida didn't
want to marry. The good part of Elinor is that she cares a lot for her
daughter. If Elinor didn't love her daughter, why would she teach
Merida strictly?
Second,
I want to compare my life to Merida's life. A good part of my life is that I
can do what I want do more often than Merida. For example, Merida can only go
out of the castle once in a year. Unlike Merida, I want go out of my house
whenever I want to go. The good part of Merida is that she has servants. She
doesn't need to clean her room and make her bed. But I have to. Also, she can
eat expensive foods. This is very important to me because I can only eat
expensive foods on special occasions while Merida can eat every day.
Third,
I want to compare my dad to Fergus. A good part of my dad is He listens less to
my mom than Fergus. For an example, Fergus can't say a word to Elinor.
He always listens to her. Our dad doesn't do that. He is in control of our
house. Unlike our dad, Fergus play's more with his kids. Our dad
plays with us, but ot as much as Fergus.
Merida's
family is better in some ways: They have servants, they're noble, and Fergus
plays with his kids more. Despite all this, however, I think my family is
better because my mom is more relaxed of rules than Merida's mom, I can do
whatever I want to do more oftentimes than Merida, and my father does
what he want's to do without listening to my mom. Also our family
atmosphere is more friendly than marilda's family's which I think is the most
important part!! (and I don’t have three naughty little brothers!!)
Thank
you for reading. I hoped you enjoyed my essay. Have a nice day!!!
(This
is the trailer of the movie brave. It shows the disagreement of Merida and
her mother Elinor)
I read it before I write my comment. You compare and contrast about Merida's and yours. I think it was a kind of good content organizing. It was really good.
답글삭제In terms of conveying a solid message, you probably wrote the best compare and contrast essay in the class. Your thesis was clear and you stood by it until the conclusion. Good work.
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