Today I want to post about my goal.
My first goal is going early to class after lunch break
Firstly,I have to do set on a alarm for 2:15pm.
Secondly, I have to pack my bag before eating lunch.
Lastly, I have to brush my teeth right after eating lunch.
My second goal is to not eat a lot.
Firstly, I have to Try to eat only a little bit of rice.
Secondly, I have to drink water instead of snacks.
Lastly If I'm really hungry, I have to eat only one bag of snacks.
My third goal is to get up at 7:05.
Firstly, I have to put on my dream lenses as fast as I can.
Secondly, I have to stop chit-chatting with my friends untill late night.
Lastly, I have to turn on my watch alarm for 6:58pm.
Thank you for reading my post!!
good job donlad keep it up. -Sanghyun
답글삭제a alarm - an alarm
답글삭제My second goal is to not eat a lot -My second goal is not to eat a lot.
alarm for 6:58 - alarm at 6:58.
These are the grammatical mistakes. Please correct them.
Other than these I like your writing. Try to read it a few times after you write it. Then you can detect mistakes.
That is my advice. We all miss you my sweety !