Argumentative Essay

Hello this is keyboard warrior in Minsago. Today I'd like to write my Argumentative essay.
the theme is 'the government should contribute towards the cost of private high school tuition'. Please read until the end and make comments.



Private high schools are expensive in Korea. For parents who are not rich, it's really hard to pay the tuition if their kids go to a private high school. I think It will be best if the government contributes towards the cost of private high school tuition.

 

Firstly, it will lessen the financial burden on parents' shoulders. The average private high school tuition is about 3,000,000 won per term. If you multiply 3,000,000, by 6, it's 18,000,000 which is a lot  of money. Some parents whose kids couldn't get a scholarship after graduating a private high school have to pay their kids' college tuition, which is about 1.5 times more than a private high school. So, if the government pays a little bit of the tuition, it will lessen the parents' burden.

 

Secondly, the government can make more jobs by paying a bit of the tuition. Currently, there are a lot of unemployed people. To ease this phenomenon, the government has to make more jobs. The government can make more jobs by paying a little bit of the tuition for private high school students. If the government pays the tuition, they have to hire people to manage the money.

 

Now, I'll talk about the bad part of the government contributing towards the cost of private high school tuition.

 

Firstly, people whose children don't attend to a private high school, have to pay money. If the government pays the tuition, they will pay the tuition from everybody's taxes. So, people who are not parents, or parents who have children who don't go to a private high school have to pay too. But, if you say there are approximately 20 million people who pay taxes, and if they pay 1,000 won per person, it will total 20,billion won. So, taxes won't need to increase by much.

 

Secondly, private high schools can use this to earn more money. If the government contributes some percentage towards the tuition, the private high schools can say that they need more tuition because they have to remodel the school. They can raise the tuition higher than they need to. If the government doesn't realize this, they have to raise the tax. people who hate the government could go to the Internet and raise public awareness. These might become a big issue, but this problem could be solved by the government sending inspector's to the schools every term.

 

For my conclusion, I think the government should contribute towards the cost of private high school tuition. The reason is, that it will lessen the financial burden on, the government can make jobs out of it, and they can solve all the really bad parts. Private schools produce more of our country's leaders, so if more qualifying students can afford to attend, then it will benefit the country. So, why not invest money to them so we can make a better country?


Thank you for reading my Argumentative essay. I hope you Enjoyed it!!

Waking up

 Waking Up

12:00 pm getting ready to go to bed. 12:20 am sleeping. 1:00 am dreaming about my teacher giving me a lot of homework. 5:00 am sleeping. 6:00 am sleeping. 6:59 am sleeping. 7:00 am alarm ringing. Waking up listening to music. 7:02 am suffering from the music. 7:03 am sleeping again. 7:20 am sleeping. 7:30 am sleeping. 8:10 my friends wake me up. 8:15 am I finally get up. I look at my watch. “I missed breakfast???!!!” I say bad things to myself. I wash my face and run to the Dasan Building. Waking up at seven is so hard!!:(

      

Compare an Contrast Essay

Hello fellow readers!

Today I'm going to write about the movie brave. After watching the movie brave, I want to compare and contrast my family and Merida's family. I think my family is better than Merida's family and I'll explain why. It's because my mom is more relaxed of rules than Merida's mom, I can do whatever I want to do more oftentimes than Merida, and my father does what he want's to do without listening to my mom. 

First, I want to compare my mom to Merida's mom, Elinor. A good part of my mom is that she is more relaxed about rules than Merida's mom. For an Example, I don't hear something like 'a prince does~' In my case, 'a kid does~' from my mom. Another goods part of my mom is she is able to understand me. On the other hand, Merida's mom doesn't know how to understand her daughters mind. In the movie, she thought that it was good for Merida to marry quickly while Merida didn't want to marry. The good part of Elinor is that she cares a lot for her daughter. If Elinor didn't love her daughter, why would she teach Merida strictly? 

Second, I want to compare my life to Merida's life. A good part of my life is that I can do what I want do more often than Merida. For example, Merida can only go out of the castle once in a year. Unlike Merida, I want go out of my house whenever I want to go. The good part of Merida is that she has servants. She doesn't need to clean her room and make her bed. But I have to. Also, she can eat expensive foods. This is very important to me because I can only eat expensive foods on special occasions while Merida can eat every day.

Third, I want to compare my dad to Fergus. A good part of my dad is He listens less to my mom than Fergus. For an example, Fergus can't say a word to Elinor. He always listens to her. Our dad doesn't do that. He is in control of our house. Unlike our dad, Fergus play's more with his kids. Our dad plays with us, but ot as much as Fergus. 

Merida's family is better in some ways: They have servants, they're noble, and Fergus plays with his kids more. Despite all this, however, I think my family is better because my mom is more relaxed of rules than Merida's mom, I can do whatever I want to do more oftentimes than Merida, and my father does what he want's to do without listening to my mom. Also our family atmosphere is more friendly than marilda's family's which I think is the most important part!! (and I don’t have three naughty little brothers!!)

Thank you for reading. I hoped you enjoyed my essay. Have a nice day!!!

(This is the trailer of the movie brave. It shows the disagreement of Merida and her mother Elinor)

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Presentation

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researching, reading, listening

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playing, not studying, watching

comfortable, cozy.
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Ode to my 2g phone

Dear 2g phone, 2g phone

your so blue and white.

I'm scared to wake you up

cause your back might break someday

2g phone 2g phone

you have so many scars.

They're all over your face.

You need plastic surgery.

2g phone 2g phone

I'ts hard to punch you

cause your so little like an ant.

I really need to touch.

2g phone 2g phone

I want to change you someday.

Your so dumb like fish

I need a smarter phone

your friend, Dohyun.

Hello people who are reading!!

Today I want to post about my goal.

My first goal is going early to class after lunch break

Firstly,I have to do set on a alarm for 2:15pm.

Secondly, I have to pack my bag before eating lunch.

Lastly, I have to brush my teeth right after eating lunch.

My second goal is to not eat a lot.

Firstly, I have to Try to eat only a little bit of rice.

Secondly, I have to drink water instead of snacks.

Lastly If I'm really hungry, I have to eat only one bag of snacks.

My third goal is to get up at 7:05.

Firstly, I have to put on my dream lenses as fast as I can.

Secondly, I have to stop chit-chatting with my friends untill late night.

Lastly, I have to turn on my watch alarm for 6:58pm. 

Thank you for reading my post!!

Self Introduction

HI, my name is Nam Do Hyun, and welcome to my blog. 

For my first post, I'd like to introduce myself. My favorite food is lasagna and carbonara. Actually I like

every cheesey food.

 I've also been to India. India has many interesting thing to see like the Tajmahal.

Also I have a dog. My dog's name is quiche. He is very cute and playful, but sometimes very naughty. Thank you for reading my blog. I think you got some information about me.