the theme is 'the government should contribute towards the cost of private high school tuition'. Please read until the end and make comments.
Private high schools are expensive in Korea. For parents who are not rich, it's really hard to pay the tuition if their kids go to a private high school. I think It will be best if the government contributes towards the cost of private high school tuition.
Firstly, it will lessen the financial burden on parents' shoulders. The average private high school tuition is about 3,000,000 won per term. If you multiply 3,000,000, by 6, it's 18,000,000 which is a lot of money. Some parents whose kids couldn't get a scholarship after graduating a private high school have to pay their kids' college tuition, which is about 1.5 times more than a private high school. So, if the government pays a little bit of the tuition, it will lessen the parents' burden.
Secondly, the government can make more jobs by paying a bit of the tuition. Currently, there are a lot of unemployed people. To ease this phenomenon, the government has to make more jobs. The government can make more jobs by paying a little bit of the tuition for private high school students. If the government pays the tuition, they have to hire people to manage the money.
Now, I'll talk about the bad part of the government contributing towards the cost of private high school tuition.
Firstly, people whose children don't attend to a private high school, have to pay money. If the government pays the tuition, they will pay the tuition from everybody's taxes. So, people who are not parents, or parents who have children who don't go to a private high school have to pay too. But, if you say there are approximately 20 million people who pay taxes, and if they pay 1,000 won per person, it will total 20,billion won. So, taxes won't need to increase by much.
Secondly, private high schools can use this to earn more money. If the government contributes some percentage towards the tuition, the private high schools can say that they need more tuition because they have to remodel the school. They can raise the tuition higher than they need to. If the government doesn't realize this, they have to raise the tax. people who hate the government could go to the Internet and raise public awareness. These might become a big issue, but this problem could be solved by the government sending inspector's to the schools every term.
For my conclusion, I think the government should contribute towards the cost of private high school tuition. The reason is, that it will lessen the financial burden on, the government can make jobs out of it, and they can solve all the really bad parts. Private schools produce more of our country's leaders, so if more qualifying students can afford to attend, then it will benefit the country. So, why not invest money to them so we can make a better country?
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